lunes, 21 de octubre de 2013

We are broken

Las week we had to write a short story based in a song, well in classical music, and most of us wrote very good stories, I can't deny it, but we wrote things that we might never say, because it is strange that teens like us  feel depressed, up to a level that we think  about suicide or death, on the other hand we seem like the tipical teenagers that think about love and the story that you might and want to live, but it is still a dream, in which we can't say anything or do anything to live it, because we might think that it is impossible, and that we are useless.

 In first place, my story was  good,  and I really felt that I was in the story, but I felt  wrong and bad while I was writing it, because  as I was writing it, I  felt shivers down my spine, my tears falling down, stress, and many other feelings that  the reader can feel. At the same time I felt that my story was already told in many other ways, because it was press inks, but I felt good writing it, it changed my point if view in myself and what do I really want for my future.

 Secondly,  the way in which my group act with the story ended up with very good ones, but as I said, these are wrong, talk about depressive thing, bad guys, etc that really need to change, because  many of these are truth, and as it is said, the stories that you create, belong to your subconscious and there, the stories and your biggest dreams  change a lot.

 In conclusion, the things that we wrote are very good, but they show a face that people doesn't see in us, because those are kind of our dreams, and deepest secrets that we  notice or express in the worst moments, but we should smile  in the others.

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